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_.Walk the Line by ~dot-InfectioN:icondot-InfectioN:

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I walk through this beaten landscape, only to find what's left of the shore. Someone made this. Someone took the time to lay out all these rocks so that the water would not erode the shoreline. This is dedicated to him. Whoever he is, whatever he does for a living, this is for him. I will always remember you.


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Taken with my camera on my spankin new sd card. Only thing I did to the photograph was darken the barrell in the background. It was too bright and took the focus away from the actual shot. Everything else was left alone.

Taken in Aperture Priority mode with AP set to +1.3.


Comments greatly appreciated. :D

**Edit: Added a black soft light layer to add less exposure to the snow and add more tone to the shadows and reflection.

--Kirk

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~youreawasteofpaint Feb 13, 2007, 7:53:42 PM
This is my all time favorite Kirky. I really love it.
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~Aukon Feb 14, 2007, 5:34:15 AM
Interesting tones and focus. :) Great shot dot-InfectioN!

-Aaron
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`gilad Feb 14, 2007, 5:40:52 AM
Creative composition and good idea.
I think the snow is over exposed in a way that is too extreme.The barrel at the back is taking too much attention.

Nice idea

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My latest piece
A different Look At Israel
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~hellemester Feb 14, 2007, 5:43:25 AM
Very nice shot, good composition and focus. It is a bit overexposed in the snow, but that's hard to avoid. Very good :)

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Flickr.
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~afiqzali Feb 14, 2007, 6:04:43 AM
nice stuff!

but u should take notice of distractions. eg: the bin(?) at the top middle and some stuff at the top right.

and i think the snow is a little too contrast.

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The formula of fear.
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~iamgoatman Feb 14, 2007, 6:33:52 AM
I like the angle, adds to the interesting composition. I dont like the bin in the background though, its quite distracting, so is the tree/bush shape in the upper left corner, they draw your eye away from the rocks and reflection. Also the snow is overexposed but i dont think this is a huge problem as snow looks its best pure and white. A tighter crop, removing the bin and the shape would really improve this and you'd have a nice shot on your hands :) hope this helps.
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~dot-InfectioN Feb 14, 2007, 8:24:46 AM
Thanks. I think that I fixed it now.

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~dot-InfectioN Feb 14, 2007, 8:25:04 AM
:D I think it looks better now.

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~dot-InfectioN Feb 14, 2007, 8:25:14 AM
fixed :P

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NIKON CORPORATION
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F/6.3
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Feb 13, 2007, 4:48:54 AM

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